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初中英語書面表達之高分秘訣
一、動筆之前，認真審題。
《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，
看到考題後，勿急於動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。
二、圍繞中心，擬定提綱 （書面表達評分原則有五條）：
☆ 1.內容要點；
2.運用語法結構和詞彙的準確性；
3.上下文的連貫性。
4.書寫規範性
5.字數達到要求大多為 100 詞左右。
三、語言通順，表達準確
☆ 1. 避免使用漢語式英語，儘量使用自己熟悉或已背過的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以
避免重複和呆板。
2. 注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。
☆ (1) 時態要準確無誤。（根據書面表達要求而定，多為一般現在時，一般過去時或一般將
來時）
☆ (2) 特別注意單數可數名詞的使用。如 My hobby is reading book.(誤)
☆ (3) 注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的 an 不能寫成 a。
☆ (4) 動名詞做主語。（很多同學喜歡用動作做主語，切記必須用動名詞或動詞不定式。）
(5) 注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如 believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant 等。
(6) 主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。
(7) 注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。尤其是動詞和介詞之後。
四、上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則。
主要是學會過渡詞，大部分為連詞的正確使用。
同學們應注意下面過渡詞的用法：
1) 表示並列關係的過渡詞：and, as well as, or …
2) 表示轉折關係的過渡詞：but, yet, however …
☆3) 表示時間關係的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally,(特別是在列舉理由或原因
或提出建議時還可以用 besides, What's more) after, before, after a few days, at last, in the
past, when, while, then, after that …
4) 表示對照關係的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the one hand, on the other hand, even
though …
5) 表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, in order to, …
6) 表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as …
7) 表示總結性的過渡詞：in brief, in a word, in general, in all, all in all, generally speaking …
五、不會表達，另闢蹊徑。
中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，多數不以文采打分。建議多用簡單句（第六
條講滿分作文的要求），複合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話："錯誤面前人人平
等，文采好不加分"。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，或出現想用的單詞出現遺忘
時，可採用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表
達習慣。在閱卷中大部分閱卷老師，一看要點。二看語法錯誤。
六、錦上添花，量力而行。
如果你的目標為滿分或接近滿分，你還有時間和精力，那麼，請注意以下幾點：
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(1) 句型多樣化，不要 I（We）……到底，使人覺得乏味。
(2) 適當使用一些並列句或主從複合句。
(3) 進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句。
(4) 適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞。
(5) 偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。
(6) 適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。
☆七、書寫工整，卷面整潔。
字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認，要保持卷面的整潔。卷面
潦草者一般會被降檔處理，也就是說扣 2-3 分。 （教師在閱卷時，同一份作文，有時會出
現差距 8-10 分的現象，大都因為書寫原因。試想一下，炎熱的夏天，50 位教師在同一個機
房，面對散熱的電腦，每天閱卷任務 300-500 份，面對潦草的試卷，部分教師極有可能會認
為你不尊重英語，不尊重英語教師，這種狀態下，很難取得高分。）
☆八、寫完之後，勿忘檢查。
中考作文時，由於時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不
可少。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手：
書面表達檢查五要求
(1) 要點是否有遺漏
(2) 語法是否有誤。尤其單數可數名詞使用及動名詞作主語是否有錯。
(3) 拼寫有無錯誤。
(4) 人稱是否用錯。
(5) 認真抄寫到答題紙,書寫規範,卷面整潔。首行縮進四個字母距離,句首詞大寫,句末實心點。
書面表達應該遵循的"五步走"的寫作思路。即：審—列---連---美---查。
◆審：認真審題，抓住要點
◆列：段落分明，列好提綱(列詞組)
◆連: 連詞成句，連句成篇
◆美: 斟詞酌句，修改打磨
◆查: 通讀文章，查找錯誤。
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英語書面表達 要注意結構（beginning 開頭, body 主體, ending 結尾），精彩的結尾，猶
如點睛之筆，會讓你的作文大放異彩。以下給大家提供一些精彩的結尾。
☆書面表達精彩結尾
Useful and beautiful sentences(必須記住)
1. All in all, I'm ready to help people who need help.
2. If everyone does something, our world will become more and more beautiful.
3. I think healthy food and different relaxing activities will help us live healthily and happily.
4. It really makes me relaxed and more energetic to concentrate on my work.
5. However, each coin has two sides.
6. We can give away some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside world.
7. Not only do I feel good about helping others, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.
8. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
9. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
10. The more we do, the better our world will be!
英語書面表達如果能適當使用諺語，也會給閱卷老師流下深刻的印象，閱卷老師會從心裡
認定你是一名出色的學生，你是一位英語水平較高的學生，從而給出很高的分數，甚至滿
分。
☆英語作文常用諺語、俗語
1. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難見真情。
2. A good beginning is half done. 良好的開端是成功的一半。
3. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一蘋果，不用請醫生。
4. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。
5. Each coin has two sides. 事情都有兩面。
6. Failure is the mother of success. 失敗是成功之母。
7. Health is better than wealth. 健康勝過財富。
8. Knowledge is power. 知識就是力量
9. No pain, no gain.不勞無獲。
10. Where there's a will, there's a way. 有志者事竟成。
11. Practice makes perfect ．熟能生巧。
12.A miss is as good as a mile．失之毫釐，差之千里。
☆書面表達我們會需要用到一些常用句型 ，如提出建議，表達決心，談論夢想，愛好等。
下面給大列舉一下常用句型：
表達提出建議的句型：
1. should +v 原型
2. can + v 原型
3. be supposed to do
4. be expected to do `
5. It's best to do
6. It's important to do
7. You'd better do
8. It's a good idea to do
9. advise sb to do
10. I suggest that we should do
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表達個人觀點的句型
1. I think/believe (that)…我認為……。
2. In my opinion, …在我看來……。
3. As I see it.…在我看來……。
4. From my point of view，… 在我看來……。
5. As far as I am concerned,…就我看來……。
表達決定、決心的句型
1. I decide to do
2. I have made up my mind to do
3. I've make a decision to do
4. I've fixed on doing sth. 【fix on: 決定；確定】
5. I will /am going to do
6. I plan to do
7. I intend to do
表示過去與現在的對比的句型
1. I had to work on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes in the past. However,
things have changed a lot now. I have more free time.
2. I used to have to work even on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes. Now I
have more free time.
3. In the past, I had to work on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes. But now
I have more free time.
4. It's quite different now. I used to have to work even on weekends doing endless homework and
attending classes, but now I have more free time.
5. It's not like it used to be at all. Now I have more free time.
6. I have more free time than before.
表達愛好的句型
1. I like / love enjoy playing the guitar best.
2. I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps In my spare time,.
3. I'm interested in collecting stamps.
4. I'm really fond of skating in winter.
5. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
6. I like nothing better than swimming.
7. I'm crazy about sports.
8. I lose myself in collecting stamps.
談論夢想的句型
1. I'm going to be / become a teacher.
2. My dream is to be a teacher.
3. I dream of becoming a teacher.
4. My goal is to become a teacher.
5. I want to be / become a teacher in the future.
6. I would like to be a teacher in the future.
7. I wish to be / become a teacher in the future.
8. I hope I will become a teacher in the future.
9. I've made up my mind to become a teacher in the future.
10. I'm determined to become a teacher in the future.
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表示"採取措施"的句型
1. Something must be done to tackle the problem.
2. It's time to take steps to control the serious pollution.
3. We must take action now to control pollution.
4. We have to take effective measures to solve this problem.
5. We should adopt some measures to fight against pollution.
中考真題之書面表達：
一．當前，學生的學校生活多姿多彩，業餘愛好也豐富多樣。下圖是我們對某所中學 300
名學生業餘愛好的調查結果。請根據以下要求，用英語寫一篇短文。
Music 48% Others2% Reading20% Sports 25% collections 5%
要求：1.必須包括：①調查結果②你自己的愛好、選擇的原因及帶來的益處。
2.文中不得出現真實的校名或人名。
3.詞數 80~100（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Many students have hobbies. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually
do in their free time.
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One possible version
Many students have hobbies. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually
do in their free time. Nearly half of the students like music, and a quarter of them usually spend
their time playing sports on weekends, twenty percent enjoy reading books. A few students like
collecting things they like, such as stamps, coins and so on. Few students have other hobbies.
As for me, I prefer listening to music. Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy
and make me relaxed after hard study. Sometimes I listen to English songs. I can learn English
words or phrases from them. It really improves my English a lot.
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二．假設你喜歡的老師是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.請根據下面的提示，以My favorite teacher
為題目，用英語寫一篇短文。
要求：1. 必須包括①description ②friendship ③the best quality 三個方面的內容，括號
內的提示可以任意選擇或可以適當發揮。
2.文中不得出現真實姓名或學校。
3．字數（80-100）（文章題目和開頭已經給出，不計入總次數）
favorite teacher: ①description (appearance, character…)
②friendship (an event between you; the story of becoming friends)
③the best quality （kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful…）
My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is
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三．同學們，三年的初中生活就要結束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請
用英文寫一篇短文，內容包括：
1.你在學校或家裡曾經遇到的最大問題或煩惱；
2.你解決問題或煩惱的過程；
3.你的感想。
要求：1.字數:80-100 字。開頭已給出，不計入總字數。
2.文中不得出現真實的校名與人名。
My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have
happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was
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書面表達一
如今，中學生的學習時間長，壓力大。下圖是我們對某所中學 300 名同學減壓放鬆的方
法的調查結果。請根據以下要求，寫一篇短文。
Music 47% Others2% Reading25% Sports 20% Traveling 6%
內容必須包括：①調查結果 ②你的壓力 ③你減壓放鬆的方式，選擇的原因或帶來的益處。
要求：（1）詞數：80-100；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
（2）必須包括所有要點，不能逐句翻譯，可適當發揮；
（3）文中不得出現真實的校名和人名。
Nowadays many students are under too much pressure, but they have their own ways to relax
themselves. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do to get relaxed.
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書面表達二
輕鬆愉快的心情有利於學習和生活。在緊張忙碌的學習之餘，你怎樣做什麼？是做運動、
聽音樂、做志願者、旅遊、看電影、還是„„？為什麼？請以"How I spend my free time?"
為題用英語寫一篇短文。
內容包括：1. 三種你的休閒時間的活動。 2. 各陳述至少一個理由。
要求：（1）詞數：80-100；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。（2）必須包括所有要點，可適當發
揮；（3）文中不得出現真實的校名和人名；
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書面表達三
緊張的中考結束後，同學們將迎來輕鬆愉快的暑假。你的暑假計劃是什麼呢？你的朋友
的暑假計劃是什麼呢？ 為什麼？請根據要求寫一篇英語短文。
內容包括：1. 你和你的朋友的暑假計劃； 2.你和你朋友制定暑假計劃的理由。
要求：1. 詞數：80-100。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
2. 文中不能出現自己的真實姓名和學校名稱。
The summer vacation is coming. My friend
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書面表達四
近來，《朗讀者》和《中國詩詞大會》等電視節目播出後，在全國掀起了全民閱讀的風
暴，著名作家 Francis Bacon 曾說過："Reading makes a full man."可見，閱讀使人聰明，閱讀
使人充實，閱讀對於每個人的成長都有著舉足輕重的作用。你平時都讀什麼書呢？請你結合
自己的觀點，以"Reading Makes a Full Man"為題，寫一篇短文，表達你對閱讀的看法和自己
未來的閱讀計劃。
內容包括：1.你平時讀的書籍； 2. 你對閱讀的看法； 3. 你未來的閱讀計劃。
要求：（1）詞數：80-100；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。（2）必須包括所有要點；
（3）文中不得出現真實的校名和人名；
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. We can
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Reading makes a full man! Let's start reading now.
優質範文展示：
書面表達一：
One possible version1:
Nowadays many students are under too much pressure, but they have their own ways to relax
themselves. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do to get relaxed.
Nearly half of the students enjoy listening to music to relax themselves, and a quarter of them
usually lower their pressure by reading books. Twenty percent of the students get relaxed by
playing sports. A few students like traveling to make themselves relaxed. Few students have other
ways to relax.
My pressure is from my parents. They expect me to study all the time so that I can get into a
high school and later a good university. They push me so hard. But I have my own way to get
relaxed. I prefer listening to music. Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy. I can learn
English words or phrases from them. It really improves my English a lot.
One possible version2:
Nowadays many students are under too much pressure, but they have their own ways to relax
themselves. Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do to get relaxed.
Nearly half of the students enjoy listening to music to relax themselves, and a quarter of them
usually lower their pressure by reading books. Twenty percent of the students get relaxed by
playing sports. A few students like traveling to make themselves relaxed. Few students have other
ways to relax.
My pressure is from my parents. They expect me to study all the time so that I can get into a
high school and later a good university. They push me so hard. But I have my own way to get
relaxed. I think the best way to relax is through traveling. Because it is healthy for the mind and
the body. What's more, it can open up my eyes to the outside world.
書面表達二：
How I spend my free time？
In my free time, I often watch English movies because it can make me feel easy and happy.
Besides, I can also improve my pronunciation, listening and grammar.
Another way to spend my free time is doing some volunteering. I love animals so I often
volunteer at an animal hospital on weekends. I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see
the animals get better, and I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
I like to travel with families in my free time, too. Traveling can make me relaxed and
energetic to concentrate on my study. What's more, and it can open up my eyes to the outside
world.
In a word, I am willing to do something meaningful in my free time.
書面表達三：
One possible version:
The summer vacation is coming. My friend Tony and I have our summer plans.
I plan to visit Shanghai with my family. Because it's one of the liveliest cities in China. I
want to open up my eyes. And I'm also going to learn to dance during the vacation. Because I like
dancing and it can keep healthy and make me relaxed.
My friend Tony would like to volunteer in an animal hospital. Because he loves animals and
wants to be a doctor in the future. He can get some experience from volunteering. What's more, he
can do what he loves to do and help others at the same time.
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書面表達四：
One possible version:
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only
open our minds but also make us wiser and richer in life. Besides, reading is also one of the most
important ways to learn a foreign language like English.
I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what's
going on around the world. I also read story books and novels which make me relaxed and happy
in my free time.
Summer vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and
more English books to improve my language skills. I'm sure reading can make a difference to my
life.
Reading makes a full man! Let's start reading now. (112 words)
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